I edited "A Time For Tony" a little bit to make it longer to fit the words. I was hoping you could tell me what you think of these lyrics. Any help is appreciated. :)
My One True Love
(Song plays up to :21, where it recycles to the beginning)
It's funny how
when times got tough,
I found that I
was all alone,
But now that all
has changed, and I
have you to call my own.
Now whenever
I'm knocked down,
and freezing in
the coldest storm,
I'll feel no chill,
now that I have
your love to keep me warm.
The sun is down, and
the stars are out, and
the moon is big and bright.
And it feels so dear, now that
you are here for me to
love all through the night.
This tender love
I've found with you,
I know will last
forevermore.
You will be
my one true love,
and I will be yours.
Bitter sounds
of loneliness
echo through this world
we're living in,
but a beacon shines
of hope and proves
that even I can win.
As I watch the frail
baby nightingale
fly as high as my eyes can see,
I think of hope, and
I think of dreams, and
what they mean to me.
(recycle to one measure before the string chorus)
And it feels so dear, now that
you are here for me to
love all through the * night. (*=cut to 1 measure before big brass finish)
This tender love
I've found with you,
I know will last
forevermore.
You will be
my one true love,
and I will be yours.
(song ends)
What do you think? Is this any good?